Side-by-Side Example: Issue Section

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Importance of wildlife corridors

INITIAL

The phrase "importance of" is a little vague.

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Conserving wildlife corridors

REFINED

Using the word "conserving" in place of "importance of" provides more specificity—she's going to discuss how to conserve these corridors, not just why they are important.

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